Its beautiful to be lost in a world of your own...
Beautiful to be unaware of what the world really thinks of you...
devoid of all worries..
no fretting and no crying...
Its beautiful to be lost in a space of your own...
and enchanting to enjoy the smell of peace..
so pure and so true..
and yet...
how blocked is my mind??
how lost am i here??
do i have all the answers?
do i know this feeling??
i do not know who i am!
nor do i know this feeling..
and yet...
Why m i so happy??
Why m i so free??
how fortunate am i today!
to be able to see what i never saw before..
to feel what i may never feel again...
to hear the most amazing voice I've heard..
on this day ..
this very day....
i hold great respect for all people who express themselves through poems..
for they are free..
each time a word that belongs to their poetry is crafted..
each time their lips shape the words in these poems...
How amazing is it..
to see my smiling reflection..
i look beautiful..
so perfect..
its amazing how each one of us is so perfect..
How can God carve us so well??
and not miss a single detail..
will i ever know you??
will i ever Know this feeling??
Why am i running out of answers??
I certainly don't know it all..
n yet..
Why m i so happy??
Why m i so free??
What Possums Eat
17 hours ago
6 comments:
hmmm u have i guess written a very touching and meaningful poem out there and believe me you r doing a wonderful job touching peoples heart like mine.Keep up the gud work
:)
Hope this experience you spoke abt transcends all the negative thoughts and feelings and establishes itself permanently in your heart...
U deserve the wonderful flow of thoughts u experienced...
Also,i would like to say wonderfully written.. this poem shows who u really are...i lovd readin it the third time..(u know why)...
An attempt of self-discovery!...
liked the lines "to be able to see what i never saw before..
to feel what i may never feel again..."
Glad to see that there still are people who think poetry is a good thing! :)
Really wonderful poem. I think u have a god gifted quality of writing poems. Awesome job & keep up the good work...
hi, i read the poem many times.. i way for writing the poem is very impressive and touching....
really very gud,, i meaning is also excellent...
keep it up
My reputation as a poem basher precedes me....
;)
But this one gets you thinking, its got a variety of themes shifting from one to the other, its impossible not to identify with atleast one!
i personally identified with "how blocked is my mind" ;D
Overall good poem you've certainly qualified as 'poet', the rare breed of people who alone know exactly what theyve written!
this theme of self discovery is unique to every individual and so difficult to put into words....you've done a great job though....keep it coming
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